I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi James! i'm Soheilla! and I really like your post! I didn't do that.. anyways! I thought that it's really cook, but have you thought that, well you could put everybody's names that did it, but anyway bye!
Talofa James, I'm Basty I like how you made jump jam because it's fun and it keeps us hot I want you to add more words because I would love to read it. bye
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Hi James! i'm Soheilla! and I really like your post! I didn't do that.. anyways! I thought that it's really cook, but have you thought that, well you could put everybody's names that did it, but anyway bye!
ReplyDeletehi James you really had to put the photo of me and ayush.And i saw wairi too.next time i think you should write more about it.
ReplyDeleteTalofa James, I'm Basty I like how you made jump jam because it's fun and it keeps us hot I want you to add more words because I would love to read it. bye
ReplyDeleteI like how you are take about it. so can you nexts time maybe get a photo of the hole school if it is ok bye Marsali
ReplyDeletehi james,
ReplyDeletei really like your post and it's really cool
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Hi it's Cody great job james just check the spelling a little good job again
ReplyDeleteHi coody it s james
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