I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
YO YO YO!!!! !!! Wassup James this is an amazing piece of work. Did you write this or did you borrow from someone, either way I loved it. Sad yet hopeful.I would love to hear any others you may have. It would be cool to keep a poetic journal. I have done this on and off in my own life and it has even helped me to write songs. Poems can be a great way to express ourselves. Stay awesome and be kind.
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YO YO YO!!!! !!! Wassup James this is an amazing piece of work. Did you write this or did you borrow from someone, either way I loved it. Sad yet hopeful.I would love to hear any others you may have. It would be cool to keep a poetic journal. I have done this on and off in my own life and it has even helped me to write songs. Poems can be a great way to express ourselves. Stay awesome and be kind.
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